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My Mother in law, while very generous and loving, is also bothersome because she tries to get too involved with my pregnancy and acts like this baby will be in her care as much as mine, which is not true, as I will be a full time Mom. It bothers me because I've looked forward to being a mom my whole life and it feels like she is trying to hone in on my experience. She calls it "her baby". She talks like she needs an extra of everything for herself (a nursery in her house, a car seat base for her car etc.) She has bought almost everything we will need for the baby, which I am grateful for, but also annoyed at because I wanted to do some shopping too. She calls me daily to ask how "her baby" is and then goes on an on about what a great Mom she was and how wonderful it will be to take care of my baby. Then she gets kind of kooky and talks like my unborn baby tells her things (she's joking but it's annoying), making it sound like she knows my baby better than me. How do I deal?
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Just be grateful that she cares for you and the baby she is not unusual and if you are ever stuck she will be the first to help you When she comes next give her a hug and join in the fun stuff about what baby is saying etc I wish my mother in law had paid for a lot of the children's things that we had to buy over he years. You will see what I mean I hope you have a Wonderful time with your children we did with our four . You are giving your Mother in law a gift of the most wonderful thing a mother can do to bring a baby in to this world . bless you.
Just be grateful that she cares for you and the baby she is not unusual and if you are ever stuck she will be the first to help you When she comes next give her a hug and join in the fun stuff about what baby is saying etc I wish my mother in law had paid for a lot of the children's things that we had to buy over he years. You will see what I mean I hope you have a Wonderful time with your children we did with our four . You are giving your Mother in law a gift of the most wonderful thing a mother can do to bring a baby in to this world . bless you.
What does everyone think of the ideas of my story?
Charlotte
Basically Annabelle is one of the oldest souls in Rocky Falls, Alaska. In a past life, she moved from Bulgaria to Alaska when she was ten. She is the daughter of the very first king of Rocky Falls (StâncoasÄ Falls) He decided that the poverty in the town would be solved if he split the town in half, one being poor and the other side being rich when really this made matters a thousand times worse. In revenge, Evangelya's mother, a villager living on the poor side who was also a witch cursed Annabelina and her father, banishing them from the rich part of North Rocky Falls and forcing them to reside in the poor part. However the spell backfired as she wasn't a very strong witch and she ended up cursing her unborn baby too, created a devilish version of Annabelle.
A powerful witchcraft family moved from Bulgaria and overtake the kingdom. The family's power is air and each of the family have a different power.They are most powerful at dawn but can become more powerful if practiced overtime.
There is Alesa (Alice) daughter of Marko (Mark) and Rayna (Regina). Her power is the power of the mind. She can make you think or see what you like. There is Damnyan (Damian), don of Marko and Rayna. His power is the ability to hear from further away, say about 300 yards. There is Emilya (Amelia) daughter of Marko and Rayna. Her power is her smell. She can catch a scent from 300 years and know exactly what it is. There is Iliya (Elijah) son of Marko and Rayna. His power is to transport himself within 300 yards of somewhere. There is Marko, the head of the family. His power is the gift of knowledge. He is able to either give a certain knowledge to someone or take it away. There is Nikolay (Nikolas) son of Marko and Regina. His power is to see what other. Angelina is the only one who is strong enough to kill Evangeliya, the cursed changeling, who created disease and illness across the globe as revenge.
So what do you think and what ways can this be improved? :)
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Charlotte. First off, I would suggest you read this piece out loud. You have an unbelievable number of errors and I think if you do that you will understand what I mean. It's very distracting and makes it difficult to focus on the story itself. Secondly, who is "Evangelya" or her daughter? Before mentioning her in the first paragraph ( In revenge, Evangelya's mother,), we readers did not know who these people were. Can you explain what the purpose was to put different names in parentheses, when you continued to use the original name going forward? (Marko (Mark) and Rayna (Regina)). And did you mean that Damnyan was the son of Marko and Rayna or is he really the don? I'm sorry, but this one is really too difficult to comment on your idea. Sue
Charlotte. First off, I would suggest you read this piece out loud. You have an unbelievable number of errors and I think if you do that you will understand what I mean. It's very distracting and makes it difficult to focus on the story itself. Secondly, who is "Evangelya" or her daughter? Before mentioning her in the first paragraph ( In revenge, Evangelya's mother,), we readers did not know who these people were. Can you explain what the purpose was to put different names in parentheses, when you continued to use the original name going forward? (Marko (Mark) and Rayna (Regina)). And did you mean that Damnyan was the son of Marko and Rayna or is he really the don? I'm sorry, but this one is really too difficult to comment on your idea. Sue
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